Improvement Plan

original lyric sheet


Jia yu Hong and I discussed that these following things needed changes.

  • Bigger left right margin
  • Fitting in all the lyrics
  • more simplified structure
  • either keep background or letter squares because the squares are competing
  • font size too large
  • two font sizes are competing, so create more hiearchy
  • keeping the busyness in check
  • experimenting with the title alignment



    • Round 3

    My second partner was Rhea K.

  • adding back some fun visual elements.
  • Larger top margin
  • Not all letters in the title and lyrics are legible. Possibly choose a different color?


    • I plan to have the jellyfish as fixed images as you scroll down the page.